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Raptor, page 69

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I made it, I made it! :D No words, only actions here!

I wanted to warn you again, that from this moment I won't stream the drawing of pages, because it takes me more time to finish them. I would stream only different arts connected with comic or with other animals.


I hope, you'll like it! :) (Smile)

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Yay, the new page of Raptor is here, I have been waiting for it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/> You made a great job with the movement and the poses, the anatomy is very good in this page! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Apple looks so sweet in the third panel! In the fourth panel I like that rope of leaves (sorry, I don't know how it's called xD) in Raptor's hands because most artists draw such things with a single stroke with a soft brush and that's it xD While here it is veeery elaborated and you even cared for the lighting, it looks super! And this idea of Raptor riding a tyranr, very original, indeed <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt=":O" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="377" title=":O (Eek)"/> Now here are the things you could improve: in the second panel, Apple is very much visible even though she is so much far away, lying in the ground, there should be something applied here, called as atmoshpheric perspective. It mean that what's farther away, it is lighter and greyish. You could draw some lines above Apple like those seen in mangas so we know she is there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> In the fifth panel where Raptor is stepping on tiranr, you should add some sound (avoid using comic sans for sound words, it is not the best, try another font in capitals/bold or make an outline for the sound word). Like THMP or something that makes no sense, just reminds us some sound. That's all I can give as advice for now, not much but I hope you find it helpful <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Keep it up, I cannot wait what happens next!